I laughed [alot]. I cried [not really]. It became a part of me. Much better than Cats. I’ll watch it again and again. And tell my friends about it.

From the production values to nice toss off lines [”don’t touch that”], a nice job all around. I think the vigilante names are too “laughing-at” instead of the larger demographic possibilities of “laughing-with”, but maybe that’s just me.

I have two thumbs. Both are up. Which sounds slightly rude.

Also, if those were not plastic implants, Nick…your nipples were freaking rockstars. Must have been cold as the teet of a witch when filming.

Good work guys, keep kicking ass and continue to take names. Soon enough, you’ll be nose deep in coke, forgetting about all your friends/family and having sex w/ transvestite hookers…glorious

My only comment would be the length. I think if you edited it down to around 6-7 min, cut some of the character setup conversations down to one key joke/moment each, it would flow a bit better; and really become a phenomenal piece. Especially the early dialogues with Nick’s char asking for the rent. I think just coming up from that intimate little nerd-fest to see Nick’s straight face would do more for the pacing at the beginning than watching the whole conversation.

Although it’s definitely not my place to crit… Excellent short.

BRILLIANT

Nice work - ive gotta make it to the site more often to check these out! Told a couple of my buddies about it over here in london - you’ve gone internationals!

Gotta say my favorite line was the Galactus bit… hes huge… devours worlds…

http://www.cfernandez.net/non_port/img/heroWorship.jpg

had some costume changes and such, my computer broke and reference wasnt an option when i drew it - but shut up anyway its fan boy art for 2-cans and company!

later
c

Blake